losing a couple more pounds...

losing a couple more pounds...

A Story by A U R i

 

“You’re losing a couple pounds Jasmine,” Comments her mom

 

“Its called exercise mother” says Jasmine rudely.

 

Upstairs Jasmine calls her boyfriend Vic.

 

“Vic I think mom knows already”

 

“Tell her its exercise nothing to worry about”

 

“I did I don’t think she bought it, It’s all you’re fault! Sometimes I just hate you Vic!”

 

Jasmine hangs up and starts to cry she starts thinking what if mom finds out what am I going to do? Should I keep doing it? Should I tell mom? Ugh so many questions, Screams Jasmine.

 

“Come down for dinner” called her mom, “Great” said Jasmine “worst part of my day”.

 

At dinner Jasmine doesn’t say much. Didn’t eat much either. When she finishes she goes straight up stairs, Went into her bathroom, Shoves her index finger in her mouth and, starts to purge. She continues purging until theirs nothing left in her stomach. After she lies down and starts to cry. Vic calls,

 

“Hey Babe”

 

“Hi” says Jasmine. “Do you think I’m skinny enough already?”

 

“Well you know I don’t like fat girls Jasmine” Replies Vic

 

“Am I really that fat?”

 

“No but a couple more pounds wouldn’t hurt baby”

 

“Okay if you say so Vic, What if something happens to me like a disease or something”

 

“It’s going to be okay stop worrying,”

 

“I been feeling really sick though light headed, fainting, so tired I mean what the f**k Vic what’s next! Ugh whatever bye”

 

Jasmine hangs up without letting Vic say anything else. She feels tired and falls asleep. When she wakes up she feels really sick nothing feels right she steps on the scale and thinks I’m 17 weighing 72 pounds why does he still think I’m fat! Months pass by and she continues on with her regular routine, and every time she steps on the scale she weighs less and less feeling worse and worse, Never feeling like doing any thing anymore. What’s become of me she thinks. Every day her mom gets more and more worried about Jasmine but doesn’t have time to deal with her attitude so she says nothing to her. Jasmine calls Vic one night crying.

 

“Hello?”

 

“Hi its Jasmine”

 

“Jasmine? Its four in the morning what’s wrong”

 

“I cant sleep, I haven’t been sleeping for a long time now, I don’t smile, I don’t laugh,

I cant seem to be happy anymore and I just don’t know what to do any more”

 

“Just relax , babe can we talk in the morning”

 

“Fine, Bye Vic”

 

“Okay Bye Jasmine”

 

Later that night Jasmine got really bad, so bad her mom had to take her to the hospital,

Doctors knew what was going on, everybody knew, except for her mom and Vic.

That morning Jasmines mom comes home to take a shower, and go back to the hospital, Suddenly she hears the phone upstairs ring.

 

“Hello”

 

“Oh umm Hi, Mrs. Marshal, Its Vic, Is Jasmine around?”

 

“No Jasmine is not around, she explained every thing to me and I think you’re a no good, low life, pathetic jerk!”

 

“Mrs. Marshal im so sorry, I didn’t mean for it to get this far.”

 

“Thanks to you my daughter is in intensive care in the hospital, Thanks to you my daughter might die! Don’t ever call here again, You’re never welcome in my house ever again”

 

“I’m sorry” replies Vic

 

Jasmines mom hangs up without another word. Vic hurries getting ready, to go to the hospital. As he gets to the hospital he quickly sees Jasmine.

 

“Baby?” says Vic

 

Jasmine suddenly opens her eyes, “Vic?” she says

 

“Baby I’m so sorry please forgive me”

 

“I forgive you Vic, I l-l-love you baby”

Jasmines eyes slowly close and the machine starts to beep

Vic goes ballistic crying, screaming, regretting everything he ever did!

 

“Im sorry Jasmine” screams Vic, “I should of loved you when I had the chance, I did love you, I loved you so much and now your gone. What am I going to do now without you.” As the doctors swarm inside the room and tell him to please evacuate the room, he says his last words to Jasmine. With a tear he cries, he slowly mumbles

 

“I love you too Jasmine”

 

“You’re losing a couple pounds Jasmine,” Comments her mom

 

“Its called exercise mother” says Jasmine rudely.

 

Upstairs Jasmine calls her boyfriend Vic.

 

“Vic I think mom knows already”

 

“Tell her its exercise nothing to worry about”

 

“I did I don’t think she bought it, It’s all you’re fault! Sometimes I just hate you Vic!”

 

Jasmine hangs up and starts to cry she starts thinking what if mom finds out what am I going to do? Should I keep doing it? Should I tell mom? Ugh so many questions, Screams Jasmine.

 

“Come down for dinner” called her mom, “Great” said Jasmine “worst part of my day”.

 

At dinner Jasmine doesn’t say much. Didn’t eat much either. When she finishes she goes straight up stairs, Went into her bathroom, Shoves her index finger in her mouth and, starts to purge. She continues purging until theirs nothing left in her stomach. After she lies down and starts to cry. Vic calls,

 

“Hey Babe”

 

“Hi” says Jasmine. “Do you think I’m skinny enough already?”

 

“Well you know I don’t like fat girls Jasmine” Replies Vic

 

“Am I really that fat?”

 

“No but a couple more pounds wouldn’t hurt baby”

 

“Okay if you say so Vic, What if something happens to me like a disease or something”

 

“It’s going to be okay stop worrying,”

 

“I been feeling really sick though light headed, fainting, so tired I mean what the f**k Vic what’s next! Ugh whatever bye”

 

Jasmine hangs up without letting Vic say anything else. She feels tired and falls asleep. When she wakes up she feels really sick nothing feels right she steps on the scale and thinks I’m 17 weighing 72 pounds why does he still think I’m fat! Months pass by and she continues on with her regular routine, and every time she steps on the scale she weighs less and less feeling worse and worse, Never feeling like doing any thing anymore. What’s become of me she thinks. Every day her mom gets more and more worried about Jasmine but doesn’t have time to deal with her attitude so she says nothing to her. Jasmine calls Vic one night crying.

 

“Hello?”

 

“Hi its Jasmine”

 

“Jasmine? Its four in the morning what’s wrong”

 

“I cant sleep, I haven’t been sleeping for a long time now, I don’t smile, I don’t laugh,

I cant seem to be happy anymore and I just don’t know what to do any more”

 

“Just relax , babe can we talk in the morning”

 

“Fine, Bye Vic”

 

“Okay Bye Jasmine”

 

Later that night Jasmine got really bad, so bad her mom had to take her to the hospital,

Doctors knew what was going on, everybody knew, except for her mom and Vic.

That morning Jasmines mom comes home to take a shower, and go back to the hospital, Suddenly she hears the phone upstairs ring.

 

“Hello”

 

“Oh umm Hi, Mrs. Marshal, Its Vic, Is Jasmine around?”

 

“No Jasmine is not around, she explained every thing to me and I think you’re a no good, low life, pathetic jerk!”

 

“Mrs. Marshal im so sorry, I didn’t mean for it to get this far.”

 

“Thanks to you my daughter is in intensive care in the hospital, Thanks to you my daughter might die! Don’t ever call here again, You’re never welcome in my house ever again”

 

“I’m sorry” replies Vic

 

Jasmines mom hangs up without another word. Vic hurries getting ready, to go to the hospital. As he gets to the hospital he quickly sees Jasmine.

 

“Baby?” says Vic

 

Jasmine suddenly opens her eyes, “Vic?” she says

 

“Baby I’m so sorry please forgive me”

 

“I forgive you Vic, I l-l-love you baby”

Jasmines eyes slowly close and the machine starts to beep

Vic goes ballistic crying, screaming, regretting everything he ever did!

 

“Im sorry Jasmine” screams Vic, “I should of loved you when I had the chance, I did love you, I loved you so much and now your gone. What am I going to do now without you.” As the doctors swarm inside the room and tell him to please evacuate the room, he says his last words to Jasmine. With a tear he cries, he slowly mumbles

 

“I love you too Jasmine”

 

“You’re losing a couple pounds Jasmine,” Comments her mom

 

“Its called exercise mother” says Jasmine rudely.

 

Upstairs Jasmine calls her boyfriend Vic.

 

“Vic I think mom knows already”

 

“Tell her its exercise nothing to worry about”

 

“I did I don’t think she bought it, It’s all you’re fault! Sometimes I just hate you Vic!”

 

Jasmine hangs up and starts to cry she starts thinking what if mom finds out what am I going to do? Should I keep doing it? Should I tell mom? Ugh so many questions, Screams Jasmine.

 

“Come down for dinner” called her mom, “Great” said Jasmine “worst part of my day”.

 

At dinner Jasmine doesn’t say much. Didn’t eat much either. When she finishes she goes straight up stairs, Went into her bathroom, Shoves her index finger in her mouth and, starts to purge. She continues purging until theirs nothing left in her stomach. After she lies down and starts to cry. Vic calls,

 

“Hey Babe”

 

“Hi” says Jasmine. “Do you think I’m skinny enough already?”

 

“Well you know I don’t like fat girls Jasmine” Replies Vic

 

“Am I really that fat?”

 

“No but a couple more pounds wouldn’t hurt baby”

 

“Okay if you say so Vic, What if something happens to me like a disease or something”

 

“It’s going to be okay stop worrying,”

 

“I been feeling really sick though light headed, fainting, so tired I mean what the f**k Vic what’s next! Ugh whatever bye”

 

Jasmine hangs up without letting Vic say anything else. She feels tired and falls asleep. When she wakes up she feels really sick nothing feels right she steps on the scale and thinks I’m 17 weighing 72 pounds why does he still think I’m fat! Months pass by and she continues on with her regular routine, and every time she steps on the scale she weighs less and less feeling worse and worse, Never feeling like doing any thing anymore. What’s become of me she thinks. Every day her mom gets more and more worried about Jasmine but doesn’t have time to deal with her attitude so she says nothing to her. Jasmine calls Vic one night crying.

 

“Hello?”

 

“Hi its Jasmine”

 

“Jasmine? Its four in the morning what’s wrong”

 

“I cant sleep, I haven’t been sleeping for a long time now, I don’t smile, I don’t laugh,

I cant seem to be happy anymore and I just don’t know what to do any more”

 

“Just relax , babe can we talk in the morning”

 

“Fine, Bye Vic”

 

“Okay Bye Jasmine”

 

Later that night Jasmine got really bad, so bad her mom had to take her to the hospital,

Doctors knew what was going on, everybody knew, except for her mom and Vic.

That morning Jasmines mom comes home to take a shower, and go back to the hospital, Suddenly she hears the phone upstairs ring.

 

“Hello”

 

“Oh umm Hi, Mrs. Marshal, Its Vic, Is Jasmine around?”

 

“No Jasmine is not around, she explained every thing to me and I think you’re a no good, low life, pathetic jerk!”

 

“Mrs. Marshal im so sorry, I didn’t mean for it to get this far.”

 

“Thanks to you my daughter is in intensive care in the hospital, Thanks to you my daughter might die! Don’t ever call here again, You’re never welcome in my house ever again”

 

“I’m sorry” replies Vic

 

Jasmines mom hangs up without another word. Vic hurries getting ready, to go to the hospital. As he gets to the hospital he quickly sees Jasmine.

 

“Baby?” says Vic

 

Jasmine suddenly opens her eyes, “Vic?” she says

 

“Baby I’m so sorry please forgive me”

 

“I forgive you Vic, I l-l-love you baby”

Jasmines eyes slowly close and the machine starts to beep

Vic goes ballistic crying, screaming, regretting everything he ever did!

 

“Im sorry Jasmine” screams Vic, “I should of loved you when I had the chance, I did love you, I loved you so much and now your gone. What am I going to do now without you.” As the doctors swarm inside the room and tell him to please evacuate the room, he says his last words to Jasmine. With a tear he cries, he slowly mumbles

 

“I love you too Jasmine”

 

“You’re losing a couple pounds Jasmine,” Comments her mom

 

“Its called exercise mother” says Jasmine rudely.

 

Upstairs Jasmine calls her boyfriend Vic.

 

“Vic I think mom knows already”

 

“Tell her its exercise nothing to worry about”

 

“I did I don’t think she bought it, It’s all you’re fault! Sometimes I just hate you Vic!”

 

Jasmine hangs up and starts to cry she starts thinking what if mom finds out what am I going to do? Should I keep doing it? Should I tell mom? Ugh so many questions, Screams Jasmine.

 

“Come down for dinner” called her mom, “Great” said Jasmine “worst part of my day”.

 

At dinner Jasmine doesn’t say much. Didn’t eat much either. When she finishes she goes straight up stairs, Went into her bathroom, Shoves her index finger in her mouth and, starts to purge. She continues purging until theirs nothing left in her stomach. After she lies down and starts to cry. Vic calls,

 

“Hey Babe”

 

“Hi” says Jasmine. “Do you think I’m skinny enough already?”

 

“Well you know I don’t like fat girls Jasmine” Replies Vic

 

“Am I really that fat?”

 

“No but a couple more pounds wouldn’t hurt baby”

 

“Okay if you say so Vic, What if something happens to me like a disease or something”

 

“It’s going to be okay stop worrying,”

 

“I been feeling really sick though light headed, fainting, so tired I mean what the f**k Vic what’s next! Ugh whatever bye”

 

Jasmine hangs up without letting Vic say anything else. She feels tired and falls asleep. When she wakes up she feels really sick nothing feels right she steps on the scale and thinks I’m 17 weighing 72 pounds why does he still think I’m fat! Months pass by and she continues on with her regular routine, and every time she steps on the scale she weighs less and less feeling worse and worse, Never feeling like doing any thing anymore. What’s become of me she thinks. Every day her mom gets more and more worried about Jasmine but doesn’t have time to deal with her attitude so she says nothing to her. Jasmine calls Vic one night crying.

 

“Hello?”

 

“Hi its Jasmine”

 

“Jasmine? Its four in the morning what’s wrong”

 

“I cant sleep, I haven’t been sleeping for a long time now, I don’t smile, I don’t laugh,

I cant seem to be happy anymore and I just don’t know what to do any more”

 

“Just relax , babe can we talk in the morning”

 

“Fine, Bye Vic”

 

“Okay Bye Jasmine”

 

Later that night Jasmine got really bad, so bad her mom had to take her to the hospital,

Doctors knew what was going on, everybody knew, except for her mom and Vic.

That morning Jasmines mom comes home to take a shower, and go back to the hospital, Suddenly she hears the phone upstairs ring.

 

“Hello”

 

“Oh umm Hi, Mrs. Marshal, Its Vic, Is Jasmine around?”

 

“No Jasmine is not around, she explained every thing to me and I think you’re a no good, low life, pathetic jerk!”

 

“Mrs. Marshal im so sorry, I didn’t mean for it to get this far.”

 

“Thanks to you my daughter is in intensive care in the hospital, Thanks to you my daughter might die! Don’t ever call here again, You’re never welcome in my house ever again”

 

“I’m sorry” replies Vic

 

Jasmines mom hangs up without another word. Vic hurries getting ready, to go to the hospital. As he gets to the hospital he quickly sees Jasmine.

 

“Baby?” says Vic

 

Jasmine suddenly opens her eyes, “Vic?” she says

 

“Baby I’m so sorry please forgive me”

 

“I forgive you Vic, I l-l-love you baby”

Jasmines eyes slowly close and the machine starts to beep

Vic goes ballistic crying, screaming, regretting everything he ever did!

 

“Im sorry Jasmine” screams Vic, “I should of loved you when I had the chance, I did love you, I loved you so much and now your gone. What am I going to do now without you.” As the doctors swarm inside the room and tell him to please evacuate the room, he says his last words to Jasmine. With a tear he cries, he slowly mumbles

 

“I love you too Jasmine”

 

© 2008 A U R i


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