Romancing Neptune

Romancing Neptune

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda

 

Overlook everything

I'm here

We are here

Together

You are in my arms

And that is all that matters

Life as we see it now

will be better

...soon

No one will keep us apart

 

© 2008 Laura E. Aranda


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Laura E. Aranda
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that is so good...i love it


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, worded wonderful and well flowed together, I like your writes you have talent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ohhh =D , I love it!
This is the best love confession I ever read. I like the fact that it expresses such an immense emotion in few soft words.

A.M.


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This was truly breathtaking

Great job

Orlando

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

look at the bent umbrella, the rain, the nasty atmosphere and people dirty all around them...they want to be together but it is so diffucult with a harsh world around them.......maybe I shoud clarify this poem more


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"Life as we see it now
will be better
...soon"

This part intrigued me. There is something that makes your tryst difficult. A forbidden love. The hint of a mystery is unsolved.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sweet and what a lovely picture! I love the pink umbrella . . . but I guess I should be commenting on the writing and not only the picture, though! I really liked the first line, 'Overlooking everything' -- it is that way, isn't it? Lovely. Flora.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This piece feels like to lovers who have to run away together to be together, and I love that. As always you have captivated me with your skill. This is another very good piece.


Richard.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like this piece alot, with the music it changes the flow and adds a depth, its solid and gentle. good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Always hope...


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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