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Egypt

Egypt

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda
"

I want to go there

"

 

 

 

Eagerly waiting to

Go to this faraway land
Yearning to touch its exotic sand

Photograph every inch of this

Tale I will dream of you always without fail

Egypt

© 2008 Laura E. Aranda


Author's Note

Laura E. Aranda
Thanks Tony for the advice!

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I want to go there too, so badly! I'd love to have my pictures taken in front of the monuments of ancient past and just to walk on the sand. Nicely done! I love Egypt!
-Twilight

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Posted 16 Years Ago


Nice....

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Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I happened upon this earlier and thought it was a really warm piece - as it ought to be evoking Egypt - and that it read sweetly and concisely. Nice romantic tone at the end as well.

P.S: Thanks for reading my piece.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 16 Years Ago


Ditto. I'm a whizz at Egyptian History, so I know the passion that drives you to see it all.

Short but straight to the point. No words wasted.

Nice! :)

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Posted 16 Years Ago



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