Afterglow Afterthoughts

Afterglow Afterthoughts

A Poem by Luna Ashgrave
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A man contemplates his state of mind after giving in to his lover's desires

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Cotton sheets drape us both
as she in slumber lies with me
Beautiful afterglow enraptures her
Oh god what have I done?

Her alabaster bottle now broken
Was I right to give in?
She begged and pleaded for me
Yet I've never felt more empty

I don't want to scar such tender heart
But this guilt; it's overbearing
Maybe later I'll tell her
But will she understand?

For now dear, dance in dreamland
Tomorrow my truth will be told

© 2013 Luna Ashgrave


Author's Note

Luna Ashgrave
Note: This is my first submission to this site. This isn't one of my better works per se, but I'm "testing the waters" and looking for some critique to improve myself.

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Added on February 19, 2013
Last Updated on February 19, 2013
Tags: afterthought, poem, free verse, virginity, love, regret

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Luna Ashgrave
Luna Ashgrave

Friendsville, TN



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Hello there and welcome to this little page of mine. I mostly jump around from genre to genre, but mostly enjoy writing fantasy and horror stories. I enjoy writing poetry and short stories and on occa.. more..

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