Lost Cause

Stop it.

I higher the music.

I said, stop it..

You pollute my thoughts,

My jaw is clenched.

Like an illness,

You poison me.

Spreading numbness throughout my body.

The sting of vodka from your lips.

You'r grip so strong,

Leaving nail marks on my arm.

I will never be free. 

Stop!

I pull at my hair to block it out,

The emotional pain. 

You'r alluring smile and persuasive voice.

Please...

Even when you are not here,

I hear you.

My world in your pocket.

Ready to take out and play with,

At 3am.

You don't even know what you do to me..

I lose myself.

A hopeless mess.

Just..

Reviews

[Katie]

I love your wording its beautiful and the way you build up to the end is wonderful!:)

[Astrid]

I feel like this piece could be interpreted in many ways depending on how the reader relates with it or how certain parts resistant with them; though mostly variants of negatives. Quite versatile all the same. Nicely done.

Note:
There are two places where "You'r" should be changed to "Your".

[DoormanDan]

This is a very emotional that is great at expressing the pain brought about by abusive relationships. You have done fantastically once again! :)

[Camryn Jeter]

If this is about an abusive relationship, you couldn't have portrayed it any better. The lack of detail leaves enough room for each individual to form their own interpretation. well done

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

I am sure about the second stanza it doesn't make sense to me. I can feel the pain and anguish all the way through. Good job

[Confuser]

Beautiful, the pitfalls and allure of love. Well written. I love it and the honesty is wonderful and the ending: I lose myself. A hopeless me. Just.....Brilliant!

[Jennesis]

Wonderful. I can hear the powerlessness of letting go. Or not being able to let go. And nothing is good at 3 AM. I love the line "My world in your pocket" it does feel like that at times. Beautiful

[Lizardo]

Ah the emotion, the emotion on this piece is like saying: ''I give up on you''
Wonderful piece of poetry
I really enjoyed reading it!

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

When love comes in, our hearts and minds become a lost cause indeed!!! NIce:)

[Cool Girl]

Wow. Very emotional... I liked it!