why do we critize

Why do we critize?

Why do we hate?

Why is there not a single person that will help out?

Why cant we all be friends?

Why cant there be a nice person to see the critize?

So When you see that help out be a friend in need.

Reviews

[Raven Wilson]

Short and to the point :D

[alesuriko]

You spelled "criticize" wrong and you didn't use apostrophes in "can't" to signify a contraction of "can" and "not." That's why we criticize, to help people realize their flaws and improve upon them.

[Blue]

Wow nice poem... Many questions, that most might not be able to answer. Good writing! =D

[Anicca]

There are a lot of valid questions in this piece and it is a very thought provoking write.

[Darwyn Sansalone]

Simple, Pleasant

[Angelwithabeard]

letting others, and the world know of whats going on is making a change. and thats really cool to many people. we all have to start off some where. i like it.^^

[Joy Lynn B.]

Wow this is very good! I like how you pretty much wriet about things that bother you! Keep it up! =)

[GunMetal]

@Infection... That was pretty good... "subatomic" food for thought...

@Otto... Reminds me of those old 70s songs, like (What's So Funny 'Bout) Peace, Love, and Understanding. Classic sentiment.

[Mr. Revan]

positivity is something that cannot be entirely surrounding us. we're in a world where physics bounds us to certain limitations. true too is our nature as a human being. For every positive atom, a negative atom is attracted to it. this makes things neutral. The problem with reactions that involve electrical charges is this: when you have an imbalance of one of the two, all hell breaks loose in the reaction.
now apply that to life.

[Frantzuu]

this lovely awesome, important questions that we can't really find answers to sometimes. Awesome piece of writing :D