Prologue...

The prologue to my story... The Stranger....

I couldn't walk another step; the heat was unbearable. The fiery flames encircled me, as I looked desperately to find my father.

I screamed his name as I moved rocks and debris. The hope was fading quickly, "Who would do this?" I wondered outloud.

Whoever the heartless soul was, I hated him for what he had done. That day I swore to myself that I would have revenge, and I would finish what my dad had started.

I would free the slaves. 

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[Vincent Weathers]

I don't really know what is going on in the prologue. When I read this, I had the image of a blaze and the character looking around looking to find fault. His desire to save slaves. I don't know what a prologue should be except that it should, at the very least give the reader a strong image in which opens the world to them and hints at a struggle. I just don't know.