Thunder version 2

ok spent a little more time and came up with this revision, by the way thanks for all who read first one

 

Thunder crash and lightning strike

Wind and snow and iron pike

Hammer blows and shield a-flux

Sinews taut and iron tusk

Let blood fly and bones a-crack

Field and forest washed in black

I stand alone with hammer high

Scream and taunt the flashing sky

The roar has ceased, the world is calm

My heart is thunder, my shield-my balm

Spirits rise from souls now dead

Wraiths and demons, screaming heads

Blood lays black upon the field

So I sit upon my shield

And wait.

 

Author's Note

thanks for reviews, this is version 2.. which is better?

Reviews

[FireAngel42029]

I like it good job