My love for you still flows................

It's been quite a while now

since you parted your ways with me...

Just not being able to let go of you

I hang on to each memory...

 

I'm left to cope with what you said

but all efforts; they seem to be in vain...

The distances seem to be growing each moment

and all I breathe is pain!!!

 

My endless longing and yearning for you

like a wild fire it grows...

I'm burning in the shadows of  our memories

and it's not tears; rather my love for you that flows...

 

And my love for you still flows...

 

I LOVE YOU!!! i MISS YOU!!! is all that I scream

as, in my emptiness, it echoes

despite where we stand today

my love for you still flows...

My love for you still flows..............................

 

Author's Note

just a follow up to my piece "That night".................

Reviews

[Lady V]

Isnt it odd that no matter what someone does to us we miss the goodtimes we had with them. They can make us cry, make us sad but we cry when wde no longer hear their voice. That was only one part of what I got from your piece. This was very good piece. Im sure many people can relate to it.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Brianna Brie]

Great write full of love and missing someone special.

I'm left to cope with what you said

but all efforts; they seem to be in vain...

The distances seem to be growing each moment

and all I breathe is pain!!!

[Ayesha Atif]

Barricade, I can relate this.
I feel the same way.
Excellent, powerful piece.

Keep exercising your talent.

[Vaishali..^_^]

aww...!! this is so beautiful....

you always express yourself best through your work....

"It's been quite a while now
since you parted your ways with me...
Just not being able to let go of you
I hang on to each memory..."

it pains like hell when we have to let go on everything....and live only with memories.....memories of the one we would never like to lose but still it all ends with silence and tears....

great work...

thanks for sharing...

[QuietPoet]

This was heartbreaking. I like your flow in this write. It truly was a painful write and deep. Nicely down.

[EpicKizzy]

its lovly there are not enoff wordz to express it!

[Ama May Cooper]

a very very powerful piece. altho i dont understand ur use of colouring, it seems a little pointless. The work is very good tho, but the red makes it stand out more i guess.. but the placing of the red words has no pattern or, understanding and that lost me alittlt

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was really very heart touching and intriguing.
A very well penned piece of writing!
The flow of your words was exceptionally brilliant and the formatting with the color thing increased the intensity of your words.
Great write :)

[BABSIE BEE]

awwwww This is so powerful with it's message of longing. Experiencing this terrible pain can only take it's toll on one. So difficult to cope with and handle yet you have made this point, probably using it as therapy.... all the way through, and it is so heartfelt. Well written and keep it flowing...till it either runs dry or the rivers join to form a waterfall. Thanks for sharing dearest.
Babsie Bee xxx

[Rebecca]

Beautiful, as always. Again you've captured my mind into a familiar place, it's as if you were speaking directly to the reader of your poem. I love it :)