Unraveling

Unraveling

A Poem by B.J
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I have been creating peace for the past few months

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Nights spent alone now
Yet I am not alone
I've traveled so far
In my mind and on foot

Unraveling my mind
Footprints around this land
My mind was like a jigsaw
A puzzle needing to be solved

Sometimes I trace my footprints
They are imprinted in my mind
I breathe the air
I breathe the freedom
This land has given me


Nights spent alone now
Yet I am not alone
I've traveled so far
In my mind and on foot

At night I sit with my dogs at my side
Listening to the sounds of the country
The wind and the rain at times
Sometimes nights so still
I hear sounds of nature

A new day unfolds
A new jigsaw
Wind and rain
Storms, Sunshine
Grey skies, Blue skies

A fellow in the skies
Once told me
Time heals all wounds
I traveled in time

To a new place in time
Unweaving, unwinding, unraveling
The storms, the grey skies
Finding blue skies, and sunshine

Now at night I sit with my dogs at my side
Listening to the sounds of the country
The wind and the rain at times
Sometimes nights so still
I hear sounds of nature
Peace created

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© 2014 B.J


Author's Note

B.J
Dedicated to my new life and the peace I created.

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I enjoyed the description and the good places you took me with.
"At night I sit with my dogs at my side
Listening to the sounds of the country
The wind and the rain at times
Sometimes nights so still
I hear sounds of nature"
Above lines would be a good place to be. In the calmness and tender hands of nature. No better place to be. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much I appreciate any comments
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
B.J

9 Years Ago

:)....................................
I liked the repetition and how it built, the last verse being fantastic. I hope you enjoy the peace you have created :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment

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Added on September 13, 2014
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Tags: freedom, mind, jigsaw

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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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