my heart is broken

loving someone who was never there for you

my heart is broken

for the last 3 months it has been.

 

i cry alot more and i don't know why.

he is the reason i always cry.

 

when we were together

it felt like forever.

 

then he was ready to let the love thing go.

i loved him and he will never know.

 

my love for him was true.

i always told him i love you.

 

he means everything to me.

hes everything i want to be.

 

but know i wonder why i shoud waste my time on this.

i just miss that soft kiss.

 

i know he thinks he knows me but really he don't.

i want to tell him but i wont.

 

i always leave my words unspoken.

and thats why my heart is always broken.

Author's Note

fallow ur heart and try to keep from getting ur heart broken don't listen to what people think of u the only opioun that matters to u is ur own.

Reviews

[Michael Kerr]

i like your poem and i can relate alot. great poem.
keep writing,
-mike kerr-

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

I hate broken hearts but it keep happening to me... i hate it and i love this poem cause it speaks to me... great write and read

[Wildecat]

This is a well written poem, sad but a good poem never the less. Thanks for sharing.

[Eagle Cruagh]

This was a nice poem.

The heart is an amazing organ, it heals rapidly.

Part of the healing process is in learning that qualities we
think of only as part and parcel of the beloved, are held in
common with a great number of people.

Look for the wonderful character traits and mannerisms in
your friends and you will find that love is a universal combination
of emotions---- look around and you will observe.

Just smile and turn the page.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Everchanging Disaster]

This is very powerful and full of emotion. I love the way you state the fact so eloquently-the only thing I noticed was that in stanza 8, line one-"don't" should be "doesn't" because of the tense you are using.

All in all a wonderful write, thanks for sharing!

[fotini]

so sad....and beautiful!

[Dalaina Renee]

Beautiful peom. Well expressed. All of us had to go through a broken heart. But once it is mended we can't waite to fall in love again...

[LacyBug]

Very good! I really enjoyed reading this! But just fallow your heart and hold your head high! Keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing with us!

Lacy :)

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beautifully written
and very sad :(

[Natasha Gibbz]

thats sad and good!!!