What Did I Do?

What Did I Do?

A Poem by TripleCK

I need a hug
I need some love
But most friends
That I need to be close
Are far
Because I push
They pull
We drift
It's sad

 

© 2008 TripleCK


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Wow...I love that line "I push, they pull,we drift"....I've seen this happen in my life....this puts it really simply. I like it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


it will no longer be sad if we stay together and keep in contact. we will never abandon you. never, ever, ever.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can almost imagine a kid saying this. The childish-ness is a nice touch. Kind of more truthful, if that make sense.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2008

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