Wrong

 

What is Shame?

How it plagues us so

Makes us feel so

Inadequate, so

Wrong?

 

What is Guilt?

How it reminds us

And binds us

Pointing to us

Shame?

 

What is Fear?

How it interferes with

And diminishes us with

Its way to remind us with

Guilt?

 

What is Weakness?

How it makes fun of

Or takes hold of

Those who are full of

Fear?

 

What is Wrong?

That which crushes us

Or oppresses us;

Shows us

Weakness?

 

Shame, Guilt, Fear, Weakness

All are Wrong, All are Wrong.

We are no longer bound by Wrong

But we are free from Wrong

Now we must make Right the Wrong

Else we too become part of the Wrong.

Author's Note

I think that I could make this better, but I've left it at a point where I'm not going to really worry about changing it more, unless people find it interesting enough to inspire me to edit it.

Reviews

[DiamondNRough AKA Patty..]

I would not change a thing, it's your original and it speaks the truth. You desribed every emotion one goes through when they do wrong, and you express we have a choice to make our wrong a right and if we don't we sacrifice ourself daily as we carry all these emotionals. Great Right!

Safe Hugs