Sail Away

This is one about a search for love....

Countless queries never asked

Many more ignored.

The haunted soul lingers on

To find happiness in accord.

 

Was it love that set him free

or the chords of such that abound?

Did the Mystery delight his soul

or once deceased, can it be found?

 

Oh set the sail and climb aboard

ore the deep blue sea of love.

Together we'll sail the seven seas

Guided by stars above.

 

 

Reviews

[BLFK]

Dear Ben,
Thank you for reviewing "Glued Back Together". I agree about me being open in writing poetry. I couldn't create walls in writing, because when I write, everything that is right or wrong, comes out and it helps me think clearly. If that all makes sense.
I like this piece of yours. I can relate with the words, especially this part:

"Was it love that set him free
or the chords of such that abound?
Did the Mystery delight his soul
or once deceased, can it be found?"

Very nice job.

BLFK

[April Child]

We just never know who is round that next corner. Very nice.

[Fire&Ice]

This poem was delightful. It rhymed in the right places, and gave a deep message, that I completely agree with. My favorite stanza was the first. Write on.

[emz]

What a sweet and beautiful write... it reminds me of the great old poets, it has a sense of calm.. loved your word choices and the flow i really enjoyed it.

[Sound]

Great piece of work. I like the way this poem flows, the words fit nicely together with little effort in piecing everything together. I like it.

[An Ordinary Woman]

So peaceful and full of desire and high hopes out there on the sea of love .... It makes me want to climb aboard that boat and test the waters. lol Very, very nice.