Small child's innocence raised from deliverance knowing that hell is a place where I once felt safe and needing words of assurance to please my mind as you think you please my body.
Gone are the days when you could talk your way through it, spinning webs that caught me with your sour milk whispers and chocolate bribes, knowing that 3 Musketeers and Dr. Pepper couldn't fix me up if they tried.
Writing, drawing, painting, trying to make Art that didn't remind me of you, to give a different spin on the name that made its way into blobs of paint and messed up words and I realized that those lies you told me backfired.
Instead of trusting you, I trusted no one, living off of praise and ways of life that never made sense except in my head and on my skin.
Arthur,
I let you be the author of my life, the creator of my story, shining glory that raised my self esteem on marionette strings, dancing with my life and my heart; should'a known from the start that the fishing line holding me up was a fish story that no one wanted to hear.
You expressed yourself very well in this. I would slow down slightly at the end though on the audio. I'm not sure, but your end lines might need revising if your running out of breath in the middle of them. Just something I read. You did a really nice job writing this.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
It was a really hard one for me to read so I was trying to get through it without crying. I did mean.. read moreIt was a really hard one for me to read so I was trying to get through it without crying. I did mean to go back and re-do it, though. Thank you for reminding me. :)
You expressed yourself very well in this. I would slow down slightly at the end though on the audio. I'm not sure, but your end lines might need revising if your running out of breath in the middle of them. Just something I read. You did a really nice job writing this.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
It was a really hard one for me to read so I was trying to get through it without crying. I did mean.. read moreIt was a really hard one for me to read so I was trying to get through it without crying. I did mean to go back and re-do it, though. Thank you for reminding me. :)