One & Only

One & Only

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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I love Jesus more than this world!!

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I just want to thank you

For all you did for me.

The way you gave your life

To make my life so sweet.

 

I know that I have sinned

& there's nothing I can do,

To be as great

& as righteous as you.

 

You have never failed me,

Even though sometimes I fail you.

I've read your word over & over

& I know that it's all true.

 

Your love is like the relief

of rain on a hot summers day.

When I think of you,

I don't know what to say.

 

I'm just a small soul

That you have saved from bad.

When I cry for you

I'm happy not sad.

 

Even though I feel lost

You love me enough

You would give your life

On that old rugged cross.

 

I'm dedicating my life,

To the one true eternal love.

Without you,

life wouldn't be enough.

 

So here's my soul,

Just for you.

The one & only love,

I know is true.

The one & only lord,

that makes me feel brand new.

 

Dear Jesus I love you.

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


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I agree. It is super sweet. u did a really good job, girly.


Posted 15 Years Ago


This was very sweet- very, very sweet :) Yea, i can tell already that ur an angel hehe. And i totally agree with your words here too :) I try and pray everyday. That's all i could do, really. Hope and pray that everything will be alright. And, truly, if it wasnt for me praying to him and asking him for help, i kid u not; i wouldnt be sitting here writing this review for you :)

B.A.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I adore this, and I feel exactly the same way! People are in awe of human to human love. But how small it is in comparison to divine love. It's stronger and more real that anything else in existance.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The simplicity to this poem was beautiful and a blessing to read. Very creative and thoughtful. I love this beginning to the end. Perfect Poetry!

Thank you for sharing this with me
Much love n respect,
Anna

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I give you a thumbs up and a Reese's this is rockin Beckah dear.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is awesome !! There is a tone of innocence to your poem that gives the piece a overall humble feeling to it. Very sweet, I loved it !

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a very sweet tribute to your faith.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this, this is wonderful, so beautiful and inspiring as well.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like the simplicity of this poem. Talks about how good GOD is. It never ceases to amaze me what we can do and he still loves us. great job. keep it up! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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