Paper Planes & Rainbows

You can't be deceived if the truth is right before your eyes.

Paper planes & rainbows

are all the rage

lately.

 

Paper planes & rainbows

won't let you down

today.

 

Paper planes won't fly you

some place you don't want to be.

 

Rainbows won't lead you

to an empty pot you see.

 

Paper planes & rainbows

are all the rage

lately.

 

You'll never be deceived again.

Author's Note

Nothing's perfect,Don't be too harsh please!

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

I liked the repetative metaphor and rythme.
Remonds me of chasing rainbows.
Nice work.

Mr.Lopez

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A simple but strong message, a truly endearing write... even as adults who says we can't enjoy those simple things we did as kids... I very wise lady you are.

[Sarah]

I really like this. When I started reading it, I didn't think I would appreciate the randomness of it all, but as I kept reading, I realized that you've captured something so real and evident in our everyday lives. We fool ourselves so much into believing what we want, that we eventually forget that it isn't truth at all. Gah, I can't really put it into words (not like you, anyway!) so I'll just say that I'm very impressed. =)

[Alice]

=) You're getting better and better every time. I really like this, you've got a grip on the extended metaphor thing nicely. Well done.

[Last Lying Look]

I liked this. It has such a neat feeling to it. It felt like I was somewhere new. A place I had never been before. And I really liked it. :)