Selfish

About a boy

Your voice sounds so much better

when you're talking to me.

I know that sounds selfish

but I can't help it.

 

Your smile is so much nicer

when you're smiling at me.

You don't even know

how that makes me feel.

 

Your eyes are so much browner

when they're looking at me.

I wish they could always

be looking in my direction.

 

Your arms & much more soothing

when they're wrapped around me.

I know this all sounds odd

but I can't help but to be

selfish over you.

Author's Note

Nothing's perfect,Don't be too harsh!!

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is actually very sweet... a wonderful display of your affections... it's not selfish when you want that person so much it's very endearing.

[An owl on the moon]

I love the personal expression, voicing so perfectly how we all tend to feel with someone we love. The one we love is special for us alone!

Craig

[Rachael]

Nicely written.
I like how you only repeat the 'selfish' line once
because sometimes it can be too much.
Very nice.