Living Out-Loud!!!

La...la...la...LOVE!!!

Here we are on the top of the world

again.

There's no where I'd rather be than right here

with you right now.

 

The world is flying by us

while we stay in one place.

Everyone watches us

as if we're some sort of a show.

 

If we were a movie

it would be a love story

meant to be

from day one.

"You had me at hello".

 

Baby we're living out loud,

Can't you hear my love beating in my heart

& the music playing in my soul?

Can't you see our story

playing in my eyes?

Let me be yours

forever.

Author's Note

Nothing is perfect,Don't be too harsh please!!

Reviews

[mick weller]

...ah, if only it could stay like this ...
and life didn't get in the way
'Can't you see our story

playing in my eyes?'
...if only

[Lyndsay Castro]

I like the simplicity, but at the same time it seems to only skim the surface, not go deeper. But it does a good job of reflecting the feelings, which are presented well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Amazing, not cliche... that last stanza really blew me away... you have a passionate soul my friend.

[Michael Carr]

yeah, bit cliche, but it is really sweet and genuinly enjoyable.
the colors added some pizazz (been so long since last time I wrote that word)
really nice!

[Sarah]

This is simple & cute... maybe a little cliche but, hey, few love poems aren't nowadays. :P I liked the colors - very fun. =)

[Last Lying Look]

This was so beautiful!!!
I was touched by the sweetness of it. When I saw the title I thought it was going to be some kick a*s poem.
My favorite part was:
"The world is flying by us
while we stay in one place."

Excellent, Excellent, EXCELLENT write!!!!!

-Elissa :D