Life Goes On

Life Goes On

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
"

Life is amazing!!

"

This country music

reminds me of you.

Isn't it funny

how things work that way,

 

The way music can take someone back

to a certain  time & place

when everything was right

or everything was wrong?

 

Isn't it amazing,

 

The way one word or phrase

can remind someone of a whole story

and one story

can bring so many tears

to so many eyes?

 

Isn't it wonderful,

 

How saving one life

can save so many others,

How the birth of one child

can keep the family name alive?

 

Isn't it a miracle,

 

How life goes on?

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


Author's Note

.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
Nothing is perfect,Don't be too harsh please!

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I THOUGHT THIS WRITING WAS VERY GOOD. NO REASON FOR FEAR OF NEGATIVE REMARKS HERE BECAUSE IT IS SIMPLE YET TO THE POINT.
IT IS CRAZY HOW EVERY SONG, MOVIE, OR SAYING TAKES A PERSON BACK TO ANOTHER MEMORY PAINTED IN THE PAST

i AM NOT SURE HOW THE POINTS AND THINGS OF THAT SORT WORKS SO PLEASE IF I DO THAT WRONG DO NOT THINK IT WAS ON PURPOSE.
jAY

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wonderful again my friend, is is so true how small and big thing in your life can effect you... music has helped me through many rough times and helped celebrate good times... your right on how a certain song can take you back to a certain moment you haven't thought of in years.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a really good piece!! It is formatted well and stirs thought in your readers. You give your readers the ability to insert their own images from their past. Giving everyone their own individual experience. Very creative.

Mr.Lopez

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love this so much!
I especially LOVE your first stanza. It drew me in right away.
A couple minor things: in your last line of the first stanza, I think you may want to put a question mark instead of a comma since it is a question.
Also, you last line reads "How life goes ONE." I think you mean "How life goes ON."
Other than that, great poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


It is wonderful, isn't it? A great little piece; I love the music line. You're so right! Thank you for sharing such a bright, optimistic poem. Gracie.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.

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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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