Lost

Lost

A Poem by beckyflowa

Walking in circles
When will this ever end
Tripped up by fears
And people who pretend

Swallowed by the lies
Threathened by the truth
Im still alone in a crowded room
Of people without you

Boarded up your love
With things i cannot see
Shattered is my heart
And many would agree

Forgotten are the talents
Crumpled are the dreams
I dont have any needles left to sew the broken seams

© 2015 beckyflowa


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Last three lines're my favorites!

Enjoyed reading your poetic art. Kinda deep & worth - reading as well. Rhythmic flow makes the poetry more powerful with such -- words. What a beautiful imagery of painful heart!

Posted 9 Years Ago


beckyflowa

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much:))

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Added on January 18, 2015
Last Updated on January 18, 2015
Tags: Song, poem, love, fantasy, review, read, sadness, anxiety, common, illness, drowning

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beckyflowa
beckyflowa

dublin, Ireland



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hello i'm becky, i use this website as mainly a store for poems i write but please do take a look and review them, feedback would be nice:) also if you have any tips on poem or short story writing, .. more..

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