The trees

The trees

A Poem by beckyflowa

Light through blinds
Head on the pillow
Shadows of trees
Yellowy tones
Growing like bones
Stretching as far as they can

Breathing and eating and loving and being
Creating, maintaining and swaying and feeling

© 2016 beckyflowa


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This is one of the most profound poems I've read about trees. You have a marvellous way of creating poems that merely rhyme when they need to. This is awesome! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Really nice description and images. Growing like bones. Nice line.

Welcome to the site.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on May 25, 2016
Last Updated on May 25, 2016
Tags: Nature, trees, appreciation

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beckyflowa
beckyflowa

dublin, Ireland



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