Hope in Reality

dashing for my dream...

I see it around the corners

I see it when I dash through streets

I see it as I dash through streets

I see it while on rockets.

I see it when I jet onewhere to another

I see it as I hurl through winds

I see it chasing after--->                                                 me.---

                      BOOM IT STRIKES        |

                                         Then closer,                                      v

                    Then closer,

Then closer,

              Racing faster than Comcast

                and many other networks

                           I start with a

                                 !M00EI

                            Then finish with my hopes and dreams

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                                  beefjerky

 

Author's Note

confusing order...

Reviews

[Lexi Nicole]

I love the layout, it brings the whole piece to life! Really nice work with this, I enjoyed it.

-Howl

[Emmie]

I actually deeply like the layout of this one... it makes the reader slow down a bit. The order made me read it through twice... but sometimes I can be a little slow, so no worries. When reality smacks you in the face, that's when you start learning more and more about yourself. Reality can be harsh though. But unlike the cold, harshness of reality, your words gently explained the topic.
Keep writing,
emmie.