The Darkness Inside

My thoughts reflecting the state of my mind. Just somehow it always brings me back to my past days, the days of bliss of the childhood innocence, which i failed to preserve in me.

The Darkness Inside

 

I walk alone in the shades

and hide myself from being seen,

With time my identity fades

and i begin to exist unseen.

 

 

I share thoughts with the silence

prevailing in the deep dark of night,

And live my life in past's remembrance

the time when life was quite right.

 

 

I wander in the lonely boulevards

reflecting on what i left behind,

Collecting the pieces of shattered shards

of my broken soul and essence of my mind.

 

 

I encounter fear and feel the threats

of the unknown and shallow emptiness,

Sinking in the sea of guilt and regrets

Like living a life, a life so lifeless.

Author's Note

Just the quality of the matter is what i am concerned about, which i am constantly trying to improve.

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is very well executed with great rhyme and meter.... you have gone fearlessly into the heart of your mind and displayed in your own words how you perceive darkness to be whilst boldly sharing your deep inner most thoughts throughout this enigmatic write.

Bravo

YB

[yash]

That's something truly positive, i dearly need such kind of motivation, thanks!!

[ayan ali dar]

this is really great one
super like

[yash]

Thanks Ayan..

[Glass Heart Inc]

Such a sad and lonely poem, but well written. Good work.

[yash]

Thanks, loneliness it reflects indeed...