DaYdReAmInG

Just A Poem :] Hope u Like It ^_^, THIS IS OnE OF THE poems i like MOST, Its my Fav. Of all of them :]

 

 

 

Daydreaming is what I find my self-doing.

 

Drifting away in the thoughts of you holding me in your arms,

 

My lips kissing yours, and you telling me “I Love You”.

 

Feeling so nice next to you, that I cant explain it.

 

That’s what I want, YOU

 

You to be close to me and tell me you love me.

 

But , my happiness ends when I go back to reality,

 

And find you not next to me and all alone again.

 

The smile I once had is now fading away,

 

The feeling of being loved is not there

 

And the “I Love You” no more.

Reviews

you're from the Philippines. (I can tell)

good form, good format, concrete message imparted.

well written for your age. Keep writing.

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omg i love this 1 so f****n much it relates to me on so many levels gurl ...8]