DaYdReAmInG

DaYdReAmInG

A Poem by Belen Gonzalez
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Just A Poem :] Hope u Like It ^_^, THIS IS OnE OF THE poems i like MOST, Its my Fav. Of all of them :]

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Daydreaming is what I find my self-doing.
 
Drifting away in the thoughts of you holding me in your arms,
 
My lips kissing yours, and you telling me “I Love You”.
 
Feeling so nice next to you, that I cant explain it.
 
That’s what I want, YOU
 
You to be close to me and tell me you love me.
 
But , my happiness ends when I go back to reality,
 
And find you not next to me and all alone again.
 
The smile I once had is now fading away,
 
The feeling of being loved is not there
 
And the “I Love You no more.

© 2008 Belen Gonzalez


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you're from the Philippines. (I can tell)

good form, good format, concrete message imparted.

well written for your age. Keep writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


omg i love this 1 so f****n much it relates to me on so many levels gurl ...8]

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on February 11, 2008
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Belen Gonzalez
Belen Gonzalez

los angeles, CA



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Well my name is Belen, and im 16 years young. My poetry is just basicly about me and whats happening. so yeah thats about it ^_^ well if u wanna talk to me just mssg me n i'll talk to u of course :D more..

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