Teardrops

Teardrops

A Poem by Regan :)

Another tear hits the ground
As you think about the pain
As you think about what you used to have
Used to do 
Used to say 
Another tear hits the ground 
As he takes more steps away
Making your heart ache even more
Than it ever had before
Another tear hits the ground
As the memories flood in 
The bad ones 
The favorite ones
The funny ones
But most of all the good ones 
Another tear hits the ground
As you still feel his arms around you
The warmth of his jacket 
His hand grasping your hand 
His lips on your lips 

© 2012 Regan :)


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Very beautiful poem. I love the repetition with "Another tear hits the ground".

Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Simple yet very well written. Has a sad/happy thing going which makes it unique. An excellent write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


sooooo good!!!!! i love it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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love it Regs! so cute.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ohmygod this is so deep i love it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


omg thats amazing!!!! his lips or your lips !!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh my God! It's so good!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is gooooodd!(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is really good regan:)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 18, 2012
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Regan :)
Regan :)

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