love the way you lie

love the way you lie

A Poem by love the way you lie

I love the way you lie

you love to see me burn

you love to see me cry

you stand here to watch me break and die

and yet I still love the way you lie    

© 2014 love the way you lie


Author's Note

love the way you lie
please don't judge

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This is lovely and there is nothing to judge about except it's brilliance, pen on.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and sweet. It hits home pretty hard, and has a sort of musical quality to it.
Very nicely Done. :)
Would love to read more of your work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful and strong words,all five lines of them!! Love it:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


love the way you lie

9 Years Ago

thanks I really like what you said about my poem
Peacegal

9 Years Ago

Your welcome:)
Indeed, we all need those delicate lies in life just to get through sometimes!

Posted 9 Years Ago


love the way you lie

9 Years Ago

I think its true too
Don't we all sometimes end up with that beautiful liar… their lies paint such happy pictures, such bright never futures.

Keep writing. This was a strong start.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

love the way you lie

9 Years Ago

thanks a bunch tell your friends to review and comment I will be back to check this tommorrow
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

I'm sorry. I don't send read requests on the behalf of others. But, I find that when one person post.. read more

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Added on September 30, 2014
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