LONELY MAN

This is about a man that loses his woman. I believe a lot of women don't understand the feeling a man gets when they've lost a good woman. We hurt too.

My head feels like a thousand pounds, for a while I've been looking down,
The moment she left me alone, I can't get use to this lonely sound,
Everything in this home is so loud, though so quiet, this house is mourning with me,
We are slowly dying, No life in this house, No joy in my heart, No love to look forward to,
we fell apart, This house is slowly falling, The yard is overgrown, My eyes are full of tears,
This pain is unknown, I am slowly dying, None of this was planned, I got this bad feeling,
I'll be dying a lonely man, The hurt is so great, I've became sick being alone,
Just a man motionless with his head down dying with his home, My surroundings feel my pain,
My body is so drained, losing you so fast wasn't worth the gain, A full future of loneliness,
A roof over me and I still feel the homelessness, I've learned that material doesn't make a home, What does is the feeling that your not alone, The joy and life of this house has walked out, The hurt and mourning and the presence of death is here now, I can't live without you and the house can't either, My heart is out somewhere wandering, have you seen her? I may not get the chance to hold her again, When she left she ran, I chased the life out this house... I'm dying a lonely man.

If you ever read this, forgive me.

Author's Note

I just type this from my phone plz bare with me. I had the urged to type this. The best time to express is when your typing about how you feel at that moment.

Reviews

[Rossen]

Lonely heart and busy thumbs,you have come to the right place...
Good poetry in this..poetry without emotion is just lofty words.
find love and get on back here and do it again...you got this one.


!00/100

[lonely heart]

Thank you very much!!!