WHO IS SHE?

Who you's or who me's?

no, who is she?

A girl confused with her clear concious?

Maybe a chick trying to sort through a serious conflict?

What about a woman who has a clear views and no issues?

Perhaps a lady who feels nothing and acts so bitter and shady?

Keep asking her and maybe she'll tell.

All it may take is one person to reach out to her to get her out of her shell.

But for now who are you to judge when your feet dont walk these shoes?

You dont know her life, she probabaly wondering the same about all you who's.

 

BIIKAY-

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the flow or words and thoughts. Hard to pin down people. people hiding behind fake smiles and lies. Good to have people we can be real with. I enjoyed the poem. Open the door to conversation and thoughts. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[BIIKAY]

aww thank you!!! I am not sure what I was thinkn wirh this one but when I was done I was like ooo ok it kinda goes..lol!

[Alexandria Reece]

'All it may take is one person to reach out to her to get her out of her shell.
But for now who are you to judge when your feet dont walk these shoes?
You dont know her life, she probabaly wondering the same about all you who's.'

That's really marvelous Biikay, I love your perspective. A very nice poem :)

[BIIKAY]

aww ^-^ It was def sumn I was not sure what I was doing....I kinda like it not my fav tho! but thanks for the shout out!

[Geraldine]

This is an interesting piece I must say and a little work could do a great magic. :D

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Am on a real roller coaster reviewing your poems this morning this is my first big dip though. This piece has too many questions and the mirror reflections don't work for me.

[BIIKAY]

John - I agree..this is def my worst peice I've wrote. I am not sure what I was thinking....lol but practice makes perfect right? :))

[Jolie Blossom]

I love this b! :) very interesting, we all put up a front at times and there's more to us than what meets the eye.

[BIIKAY]

LOL! AWSOMEEE :))) omg I dont even know what I was thinking when I wrote this. so...WHO IS SHE??? :)

[TheAdamBryant]

Who is she ? No one gonna now
Who is she ? We will not know
Don't think you know her
You don't even know yourself
a tried to a little poem right now .... :)