Jimmy Sullivan <3

I don't really have an official title for it, but it's about the death of my favorite drummer, vocalist, and overall musician, The Rev from Avenged Sevenfold. Tell me what you think! Thanks (:

I'll never be the same,
My vision is skewed,
My inspiration has fallen,
The struggle is cued.
Won't watch you fade,
Won't say goodbye,
You may be gone,
But memory never dies.
Your music, your heart, your laughter, your name,
Your burning desire to be the best at your game.
Those are the things I'll never forget,
I'm not ready to let you go yet..
So in your music, your drumming and lyrics,
Is where your spirit lives, and I'll continue to share it.
I'll never be the same,
My vision is skewed,
My inspiration has fallen,
The struggle is cued,
Won't watch you fade,
Won't say goodbye,
Your body may be gone,
But Jimmy never dies.
You partied too hard,
Took too much for one night.
Jimmy, I forgive you,
You were just living it up, right?
My daydream has ended,
My nightmare begun.
My inspiration has fallen,
Reality has won.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think about this. And don't spare my feelings, lol. For the most part, I have none :D Hahah, but seriously this took a lot of work, and I would really appreciate some honest reviews.

Reviews

[Legion]

That really sucked that he died. I was just getting into them when that happened. Good homage to him.

[Revolved]

This is a great poem! i love the ending too it just sums it up good. I never really heard about him but RIP Jimmy!