What happens is just all good

Wht hppns is just all #gud
People come to our life..
As a stranger..
Becmz frnd..n goz az stranger
Time #haz it'z attitude.
Nor it goes back neither #allows things to go back..
#all is go ahead ..
Or end the tym
Ending the tym is #ending_the lyf
Nun of us can do so..
No relation is valued..
Its all just tymz wish ..
If tym wish...
Hundreds r around u..
If not ..no one iz around u 
Tym has #its own attitude 
Neither it changes ..
Nor it allows u to chnge

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I do not read this as a message written with mistakes (as one reviewer mentioned). I see this as a writing style that includes unusual spellings on purpose. I use a few words that way, like: becuz (for example). But I do have to say that I think your style of using these odd spellings is a little bit too much for me. I think a signature style can include some words like this, but yours is so much like this, I can barely read it & understand it. Lots of younger people like this & I'm sure you'll find followers who love your writing. But for me, I prefer a little more structure that follows the rules of written English (I'm old & old-fashioned, having done writing for a living all my life, I know most paying jobs require us to be more precise in our use of English). Thank you for understanding the ways I am not following your writing style (((HUGS)))

[Prashant Bajpai]

thanks mam for the review an di will surely take care of the word and the norms of the English poetry thankiew soo much for the guidelines

[Priyanshi]

Really, this poem holds a strong message in it...wonderful write...and really enjoyed it.

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew soo much and a writer is always so happy if the readers get the messages which he wanted to covey via his writing

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, true...I can understand that.

[Surya]

Despite of it's errors, message is good...Time waits for no one, we have to move on with it....I enjoyed it...:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

yes brother we should always go with meaning because spelling mistake are never meant i guess because at the time of reading me need to pronounce.....

[writ rajat]

What you want to prove by writing like this

[Prashant Bajpai]

my friend i dont want to prove anyting i wrote this when i was going through very hard tym and i was wishing to change the time and when people were leaving me try to understand the concept as a poet

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I like the meaning and message of the poem I understand it it's meaning is good but there's a few English spelling mistakes etc but overall I under and liked the message you got across

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew so much but i will surely reduce the mistakes

[Prashant Bajpai]

i wrote when i wanted to change the time i was going through