bit by bit

bit by bit

A Poem by brokenlove

Sparingly you give me pieces of a shattered soul.
who's just dying to be consoled
but I know the pain you carry
and the damage it will do.
And the fear you have of freedom 
That sometimes confines you.
The face of strength covers you 
a body of armor with a shield 
What will it take to break you,
so i can experience your flaws.
words lost in translation 
a misscomunication under a blanket of fear.
a narrow heart guides you because
your vision is unclear.

© 2013 brokenlove


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


its beautiful..

Posted 11 Years Ago


The feelings with this one. Every word is perfectly chosen. I really like how the person is trying to coerce something fragile and valuable from this other broken person.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

221 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 22, 2013
Last Updated on April 22, 2013

Author

brokenlove
brokenlove

About
im a singer/songwirtter more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


August August

A Poem by I.F.W. Davis