Like Magic

Like Magic

A Poem by Brenda Sue



A lost soulmate
Where is his balance
World falling apart
Cause of her absence
 
To dream sweet dreams
She has to depart
Makes for sleepless nights
And a broken heart

Like magic it came
The sound of a voice
From miles away
She had no choice

The touch of their hands
The look in their eyes
A new love arose
For Jonah is wise

© 2008 Brenda Sue


Author's Note

Brenda Sue
My favorite movie is "Sleepless in Seattle".

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I like it,,, It has it all Love, loss, hope and a happy ending,,

This is beautiful Brenda =)

Love
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

New love to cure the pain of lost one.
Great poem.
Maria

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love and hope--two of my favorite ingredients of a lovely poem. Yours is no exception. Your poem is very lovely, sad and then bright!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THIS POEM IS REALLY KOO I HOPE 2 READ MO LIKE THIS

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very romantic and uplifting piece and so true!! I have been relating to many poems tonight. I enjoyed this one too. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem. So soft and sensitive. Nice write!

-Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can you see you loved the movie, because clearly you had to to write such a lovely poem about it. Now write one about Gone With the Wind LOL

Great job Brenda :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool movie. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I have watched this movie a lot. Love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. It's very romantic, and fits my mood right now. It flows well and has nice rhym. You obviously had it really bad for this girl.... Well at least now you have some great poems to share with us!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brenda Sue

Chatsworth, GA



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