cookie thief ( weird writers prompt)

I locked them away in an iron box,

 Overlooked their sweet calls,

Tied myself to the bed,

Made traps

Entraped

Ambushed

Lied

Even though

When I checked

Peeked

Glanced,

Into their depths

It was Empty

Poof

Goodbye.

Sherlock Holmes

I became

Seeking

Looking

For the blame

When I found it

I cried

‘Cuz you took them

Ate them

Leaving crumbs on the floor

Without leaving me at least one!

Oh how I hate you

O dear husband of mine.

Author's Note

As always the weirder the 'prompts' get the funnier it is to write back the responses. xD
Oh by the way i am not married 'cuz i'm still a teen but imagine how would you feel if your husband ate your cookies! Cruel, just cruel...xD

Reviews

[togo_spirit]

great!! i don't know much about poetry, but i loved it's rhythm!!

[goltinfron_nh]

That one is great.... being the husband that was caught doing that one day. There was no name on them :-)

[nono]

haha ate you're cookies! If it's peanut butter cookies then I have a problem that's my favorite kinda cookie. I would be mad!! You'd get an ear full from me. Very nice job, very well written keep up the good work!