Cherry Blossoms

Like a robin, beyond the horizon you flew,

Leaving me lonesome in a state of blue.

Now how would I find you, where would I go,

Sans you the glory of my heart is getting low.

 

Your loving memories will always make me weep;

Have you forgot the promise I had told you to keep.

The promise to glance as one beyond the stars;

To make a new land free from all cruelty and wars.

 

You are my true love, not a dull game.

Don't you know you were my only flame;

Who had showed me the way towards the fairy land.

Darling, I just want to hold again your hand.

 

I can't forget those moments spent under the silvery moon.

Darling, I am waiting for you, please come back soon.

I believe we will watch the cheery blossoms fall again;

We will again run up to the hill, to our secret domain.

Author's Note

Inspired by the Japanese Romantic Movie - 5 centimetre per second

Reviews

[Addict With a Pen]

I like the poem a lot. I think the words you used to describe the lover are very good. I also think the rhyming might have changed what could have been a great story plot. Instead of the rhymes leading the way of the story, the story should lead the way, and the rhyming should seem almost accidental. Great write besides that.

[Lorry]

Captured perfectly with great choice of words, painting a picture of hope, that those cherry blossoms will fall again for you both one day.

[Abhijeet Kumar]

Thank you.

[Silent_Whispers]

Beautiful use of imagery here to portray quite a sad story of love and loss. Very well done, really enjoyed the read.

[Abhijeet Kumar]

Thank you very much. Have a nice day.