Angel in Hell

Angel in Hell

A Poem by Jamie-Lynn
"

A fallen angel burning...

"

Her wings were broken,

therefore she fell.

And so she became,

the angel in Hell.

 

Blood surrounded her,

she began to cry.

The flames burned around her,

and she wished she could fly.

 

Teach her to live,

teach her to fly.

Dry all her tears

and don't let her die.

 

Her wings were broken,

therefore she fell.

And so she became,

the angel in Hell.

© 2010 Jamie-Lynn


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flawless rhyme scheme~ beautiful composition~ what a wondrous array of storytelling within the body of four stanzas~

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Jamie-Lynn
Jamie-Lynn

Warwick, RI



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