Dark night

                              Dark dark night let your sweet voice sing .

                           In the moonlight you wait for my cry of delight.

                          Although in the shifting and drifting sand of time.

                     You wallow and wait as if you are dieing of cold sarrow.

                   

                Be yourself and fallow the earthbound chill that caresses the body.

                              But a mystery is the dark  cold and wet.

                               Even in the darkest of nights you hide.

                            Give me your stride of comfort and deap devotion.

                           Let it fill my soul with wisdom and self pity.     

                          I pray you fall asleep in the bitter and frigid air.

           To wait in the harmful night you first arouse to in that nightmarish dream.

                               Pray you find that deep dark night.

                              As it begins to smile against your skin .

                         Let it guide you through all desires of the night.

                   

                         Dark dark night let your sweet voice sing.

                         Let the voice of the sun call apone thee...

          Farwell.

Author's Note

Dark night is the most beautiful place to be.
Wish only for the darkest day and you will find inner peace.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I like the write…but let us have at this one and give the verse life…without the interruptions:

Dark dark night let your sweet voice sing .
In the moonlight you wait for my cry of delight.
Although in the shifting and drifting sand of time.
You wallow and wait as if you are dieing of cold sarrow.

Be yourself and fallow the earthbound chill that caresses the body.
But a mystery is the dark cold and wet.
Even in the darkest of nights you hide.
Give me your stride of comfort and deap devotion.
Let it fill my soul with wisdom and self pity.
I pray you fall asleep in the bitter and frigid air.
To wait in the harmful night you first arouse to in that nightmarish dream.
Pray you find that deep dark night.
As it begins to smile against your skin .
Let it guide you through all desires of the night.

Dark dark night let your sweet voice sing.
Let the voice of the sun call apone thee...
Farwell.
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Dark… dark night let your sweet voice sing.
In the moonlight, you wait for my cry of delight.
In the shift and drift goes sand of time.
You wallow and wait as if you are dying of cold sorrow.

Be yourself and fallow the earthbound chill that caresses the body.
But a mystery is the dark cold and wet.
Even in the darkest of nights, you hide.
Give me your stride of comfort and deep devotion.
Let it fill my soul with wisdom and self-pity.
I pray you fall asleep in the bitter and frigid air.
Wait in the harmful night.
You first arouse to in that nightmarish dream.
Pray you find that deep dark night.
As it begins and smile against your skin.
Let it guide you through all desires of the night.

Dark… dark night let your sweet voice sing.
Let the voice of the sun call upon thee...
Farewell.

I hope you see that the verse can be more fluid…the reader can appreciate the work and not worry about the distractions…but the beauty of it all…