life

an attempt at rhyming

Life is filled with tones,

Skills to be honed.

Some days you are in a rut,

Life can really rot.

Many chances are given

To make things even.

Depends on the will

And not on a pill.

Isn’t life really amazing?

 

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Pepper]

wow.. That was great. A lot of meaning in such few words.

[sette]

thanks for the nice words

[lightsong]

Yes! depends on the "will", that's the key, "Yourself" and only Yourself! I love music and I believe in it, to read Your words thinking of life as a song is amazing... life is but a real dream...

[sette]

thanks for the kind words light

[lightsong]

You are welcome my friend :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Life is, indeed, amazing.
Imperfect me certainly appreciates that "many chances" provision.
A nifty bit of writing, Sette!

[sette]

thanks jimmy, i appreciate every review you give it helps me grow.

[Karmee]

Depends on the will
And not on a pill.

Wow to these lines here! excellent write very intriguing.
Life is meant to be lived without pills to make us happy.

[sette]

yes so true, we are here to live and not to be destroyed

[Ghost]

Life is how people cope with it, and it does sometimes destroy people as well... You're right we need to steer life and not let it take its course.. It is inspiring to read the words that you have wrote..

[sette]

thanks so much ghost appreciate it

[¿]

Yes!!!!! Life's amazing..... and I'm happy to go through everything that happened in my life. The line"And not on a pill" inspires..........😊

[sette]

that is the right attitude my friend

[RW Erskine]

interesting I say
a little bumpity bump, but not bad

[sette]

thanks for the wonderful review