Deep Cut

Deep Cut

A Poem by Moth Phoenix
"

Asked my friend out, he just shot me down, cried myself to sleep. this was 2 years ago and i haven't forgotten.

"

I watch you in school everyday,

all I do is cry.

I can't accept the fact that you don't wanna be friends,

what happened? 

We used to laugh together,

now we can't even look at one another. 

I guess you can't see past the innocent crush I had on you,

I want to look into your eyes of blue. 

I'd tell you that you made me cry myself to sleep,

because you gave me such a cut, so deep.

I'll wait here so that maybe one day,

I can look you in the eye and tell you what I need to say.

© 2010 Moth Phoenix


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ooooh, man
that sucks
that has happened to me a few times...
i know how you feel.
ok and it happened twice...
but i feel for you man...

Posted 14 Years Ago


very sad he probly didnt want ot lead you on and thats gay he wont be your friend

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good poem. I feel bad for you. I remember a lot of stuff like that. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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