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Set Me Free **Shawna & BLitZeD**

Set Me Free **Shawna & BLitZeD**

A Poem by BLitZeD
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SET ME FREE
*Shawna & BLitZeD*


Responsibility to the family
Despite insult and injury
Presses down on me
I want to flee 
but I know I'll never be free 

It pains me
And drains me
When you try to cast all your blame on me
And I'm left on my knees screaming
Don't you remember that you created me?

Gnarled twisted branches of my family tree
Sometimes it seems like you all hate me
But I'm not gonna let it break me
Because I'm making plans to shake free
From all this damned insanity

So I take a step back to look at me
 Like frogs and locust, plagues I see
Broken mirrors under ladders with a hex times three.
Black Magik of Sabbath Witch Craft, 
I rise up from that knee. 

Magik of Black, A fith of witch, I used to craft this key with.
Matter of fact, I can see the crack in that family tree s**t.
Your shackles have snapped and I didnt even get to use my key yet.

A kings set , a queens nest 
Twisted worlds of words , most a far stretch. 
Free, but the sanity still hasn't come yet.
Faith in humanity, such a dark net.  
  
I feel like a failure to you and myself
But just haven't found a way to take myself off the shelf
The insanity haunts, screams and taunts
Trying to pull me back to the prison of your wants

I feel my independence rage
Breathing brimstone and fire at that infernal cage
I realize I don't need to be a Sage
To finally use that key, I think I have come of age

Family tree s**t doesn't hold me
I am strong and I control that damned key
Into the background fades the whispers of your insanity
With that faith in me, so it's restored in humanity

© 2016 BLitZeD


Author's Note

BLitZeD
**Shawna** -- http://www.writerscafe.org/ShawnaMars

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dan
So well crafted and seamless...it's hard to tell that it's a collaboration, you are both on the same wavelength throughout, marching in lockstep, a Blue Man Group of words. Like most of your writes (BLitZeD) this piece rings with intensity and a fluidity of imparting the message. Simply excellent! take care...dan

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incredible collaboration, it has that lyrical feel. great job you two!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I agree with dan in the featured review, it is hard to tell you apart because your writing styles fit together so perfectly. Love this and everything you both do! (Would do a more developed review but it's now 5am I must go the f**k to bed...) Love as always x

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dan
So well crafted and seamless...it's hard to tell that it's a collaboration, you are both on the same wavelength throughout, marching in lockstep, a Blue Man Group of words. Like most of your writes (BLitZeD) this piece rings with intensity and a fluidity of imparting the message. Simply excellent! take care...dan

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written!
Great job you two!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

iv`e wondered how a person can just be eliminated from the family
and feel inadequate .emotional write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I had fun with this and I think it turned out be a powerful and emotional piece. :) Good job to us!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

YAY US!!!!! :) i agree , its quite a beautiful piece
(first review 😃yes!!😄😆)
anyways, great emotion, I love the flow, the raging styles just dance together...beautifully done, thanks for having me read😃

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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

lmao, congrats on being first :) thank you very much. kind words are highly appreciated
annalysiar

3 Years Ago

Lol you're more than welcome thanks for having me read😃😃😃
glad I made you laugh too
BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

::) )

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