BLitZ3D SAGA (in progress)

BLitZ3D SAGA (in progress)

A Poem by BLitZeD

BLitZ3D SAGA
 (not even close to being finished)

~3Y3 0F TH3 $t0rM~

As I wonder, I conjure a monster with this wand and my honor.
I ponder how you can squander my genre, I'm lava.
Anacondas to lamas, venomous, I'm black mambas.
Garfield comma lasagna, that's pasta.
Comets comment on the trauma after I bombed ya.  
Vomit iguana after the vodka in the Bahamas.
In the cabana like Osama, playing hide and seek, trying to avoid the drama.
but my Pride hunts and peaks when I speak, 
A void, this is the 3Y3 of the BLitZ3D SAGA.
Blunts of kief while I reap, hydroponic droid.
Quick like Raffekie but I lead like Mufassa.
I'm Scar to hyenas, and yes I am Luke's Father.
Hiatus, I'm too high, I am a Sky Walker.
Hydra made, I claim Dark Mage
Use 3's when I write, and spell magic with a K.
Your gana need to come harder.
This is Tree times 3 vs Special K.
Said f**k it and versed myself 3 ways that one day.
It was MagiKal, see the intentional K?
Savage truth, My pills red.
Down the rabbit hole, I'm here to stay.
Reach out an ravage your ankle.
Pull you in, M.I.B. I'm Agent-K. 
Mage In Black, Dark Arts, 
Matrix word play, not an absurd grey.
 Prometheus, I am Predator
A.I., I-Robot, I Am Legend,
 Will Smith, Independence Day.
Annunaki I am a descendant.
The First Demi they selected,
Earths representative that slays.
An entity,
When they spoke of god, what they meant was me.
The incarnation of uncertainty.
Hell bent on carnage, feeds on false beliefs. 
"The Scripture", "Birthed from the streets."
A reputation you cant tarnish.
I don't expect relief.
Mercy is for the weak.
I'll die standing before I ever drop to a knee. 
The first to leap.
I AM BLitZ3D.
THIS IS TH3 3Y3'S OF TH3 L3GACY THAT IS M3.
"E.T
"A Lion, A Demon, A Creature Of Myth, An Alien Being"
Plasma is on the page but ET's not bleeding. 
That's just my pen leaking, Kracken ink can be misleading. 
Submerged marines, Titanic icebergs, Atlantis reemerge on my command , sorcerer supreme, Gigantic knights Converge, 
Looped in a green screen dream sequence scene theme, 
"The Sheep Will Always Scream"
Eye of the storm, I am Dopamine 
I am dope, I mean. Am I not dope man?
I am the dope man to the feigns.
Compared to me your a f*****g Tylenol,
I'll set a bullet between your eyes and bless a cup of Lean,
Did you catch the Tylenol reference? 
Rhyme was in between the lines,  
active ingredient , acetaminophen, 
i'm a meta-human not your average human being. 
Compared to me, your a little dead it seems 

I'm the definition of Project Blue Beam. 

© 2017 BLitZeD


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Honestly, this work of yours ignites strength in many who read it.. (even they not all that interested in poetry in general) ..regardless of faith or theory, this is truly thought provoking and also fun to read. Thank you very much for this interesting and highly entertaining piece of inspiration~
Rock on :)

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BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

thank you . highly appreciated



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Honestly, this work of yours ignites strength in many who read it.. (even they not all that interested in poetry in general) ..regardless of faith or theory, this is truly thought provoking and also fun to read. Thank you very much for this interesting and highly entertaining piece of inspiration~
Rock on :)

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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

thank you . highly appreciated
I enjoyed your poem. You are such a strong expressive writer. I like the spins and turns along with the rhythm's easy flow. Am sorry for the late review. Been offline for the past few months. I'm back now, playing catchup with backed up read requests. Keep up the good job. Keep writing.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


lol. who pissed in your cheerios? I love it. And I have been told I can be a b***h. Might need to save this, grins. A few suggestions for what they are worth. "It was magikal see the intentional K", driving point home to hard, already explained let the reader get it. Some of us have intelligence and do, grins. Also I think it should end with ""A Lion, A Demon, A Creature Of Myth, An Alien Being". For what it is worth. Its a piece that stands on its own until that point, after that it becomes personal. Not sure it needed to go there. I think it was better on its own. I get some of the well written verses at the end and the symbols, just think its better and stronger on its own.

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Hooked on to it's very word! Fabulous job :) Authors, poets like you have a lot of potential. Keep it up, and please don't stop writing.
Also, would love if you could check out, review, rate etc. :P my latest piece, It's called 'Letters to Rachel'

A very big thanks to you and regards!

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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thank you, and sure ill check it out in a minute
So glad to hear it's in progress and there is still more to come!
I love all the references made throughout and as of yet I cannot pick a single favourite line, it's rhythm is fabulous and flawless as always, I love all of your work so much :)
Looking forward to reading more soon! :D

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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

hey, thanks for this review and all the others you did earlier. s**t like that means a lot. Im glad .. read more
BlaqkShadow

3 Years Ago

Haven't collabed with anyone in years but would be interesting to say the least XD Love your work, w.. read more
Good write Blitzed. Vivid words and and great vision written. I liked it very much

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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thanks bro
That first line was awesome!!
Keep it up!

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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

mucho gracious senorita jajaja
I like this and I can't wait til the next one comes out

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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thank you thank you
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dan
BLitZ3D, There are a lot of references in this piece that I don't understand (movies, Star Wars, names). "Kracken ink can be misleading..." Now THAT'S one that I get (a f****n' liquor commercial!) and splitting dopamine into "I am dope, I mean..."; this type of excellent wordplay make a piece in which a lot of cultural references I don't understand so damn enjoyable to read. (BTW, I guess you didn't want the music playing automatically from the start. That's cool, it's all good.
As usual, a kick-a$$ write! take care...dan

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BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

lol lukes father is Darth Vader. Mufassa is King of lions.

I gada mess with the code.. read more
dan

3 Years Ago

Yeah, I've been asked and sent the same document to about 5 or 6 other people and they all wrote bac.. read more

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