way to warm

hi this is my very first poem.

Heat

warm, reminder

Burning, Dancing

Eats everything it sees

Flames

Author's Note

don't play with fire

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice, but needs more, not a bad start. keep on writing

[Emily]

simple and pointed, I like it.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the dual nature of fire leaps the center page in your hands~ well done~

well it's a start

[Bloodyfox]

thank you

it's got a catchy rhythm.