These Words

This is another acrostic poem!!!

They help you when you are down

Hold you smile up

Everything you want it to be

Something you can’t get enough

Every day it can make you fall in love 

 

When you know you’re not alone

Open up your ears and clean out your soul

Remembers your name

Does anything that you want it to

Say I’m sorry and I love you

Reviews

[TheJordBaker]

very nice, cleverly done- a great flow and meaningful craft of words. keep it up!!

[Pax]

Nice work!

[afra]

very deep write ...well done

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[The dark story]

wow.nice work!i like it.........especially the way you put the title in your verses......it's concise and has got a deep meaning

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[Lost in Wonderland]

Another lovely acrostic! I liked it:) One mistake I found Was I think you meant "Your" in this line: "Hold you smile up"
God Bless:)
~Mickey

[Brandon Mathis]

i seem to do that when i type it and have it to fast in my head, lol i'll fix thank you for the review

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha no prob, I do that too!