Pain Forever

Peeling at the skin

Agonizing to the end

Inside of your own head

Never ends till you are dead

 

Finds where it hurts the most

Opens your heart and makes it burst

Remembers the bad memories and makes them a curse

Everyday beyond your control

Versus you everyday

Erases all the good and leaves you in chains

Realizing that you are trapped and it all stains

Reviews

[TheJordBaker]

well worked. it's never easy to write to a strict scheme but you've done it no problem and come out with a deep write. good stuff!!

[Pax]

nice and very sad.

[afra]

wow another deep write ....well done

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you