Never

I spring to life

right before your eyes

I shattered the pieces

to my disguise

 

Never wanted to hurt

so I created my own world

never wanted to leave this place

everyone could see the hate

never did I want this shame

who can you really blame?

 

I told myself that everything was all right

everthing black as night

stand in my corner and cry

letting out my shine to my life

this is how it looks

when your world gets shook

 

Never did I want you to know

where this dark hole goes

now that you’re here

I will tell you all my fears

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write. Sounds like me when I was...

[Shay]

i like the ryhming and the poem is really good.

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

This goes well with your other one i read, my favorite part is the last and first stanzas. The flow is really nice, i enjoyed reading this, Thank You!