Move

Move

A Poem by WillyMFNt

there

far away

in the distance

you grasp and move at speeds even technology cannot explain
clammer to get the attention of that which you want

there

far away

in the distance

push harder move quicker jump spin kick reach
sweat rolls off the body like insects avioding smoke

there

far away

in the distance

but why does it evade move slide and pull away
is that thing that want that desire wanting you

there

far away

© 2012 WillyMFNt


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Love it. I could feel the want, the reach and then the object of desire "slide and pull away" while reading your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a powerful deep read, nicely expressed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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