Ride

Simplicity in chaos

conditioned response that wasnt forgotten

reminded of a life long past

a roller coaster of a ride

derailed

switched tracks

that fear of falling that you get when dreaming

that lasted

what remains

a host

with no parasite

 

Reviews

[Michael Opoku-Addo]

A very deep and interesting poem. Good write!

[Diane]

"a host with no parasite" pretty powerful. I like your work..

[WillyMFNt]

this was a quick write. Just simply writing out the emotion as it transpires within.

[closed..acct]

I really enjoyed this piece, simple and to the point!

[Elizabeth]

I like your writting, One of a kind and simply just, Stunning... Thank you for sharring this... 100/100!