Laughter

The appreciation of a child's laugh that goes beyond words

The sound if glee as it leaves a childs mouth is one of such splendor
If someone found a way to bottle it up, I would sell it as a vendor
Something about that twinkling sound, can make any person smile
For when a child is having fun and laughs, people usually stay awhile
Nithing else is quite the same, it's so magical, whimsical, pure
When people hear it, they sometimes feel safe, a bubble, like a coat of fur
Because for sone people, it can make them crack a smile, and they feel happy
And I'm not being silly, theres no joke, no prank, and I'm certainly not being sappy
Yet we can all agree, especially if you have a little one, you often laugh with them
And I think its because, we're happy seeing them like this, small, like a stem
We help them grow, show them things, play with them, help them blossum
And as they grow, you still see a baby, a child, but you see their awesome
So for now, while they're little, playing with dolls an toy guns, with them you play
Bevause then you see them change, they copy, act like you, cause they love you
And you know, in your heart, is where they'll always stay

Author's Note

This is my first poem, so be kind when criticizing.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

You have good form, good narrative, good rhymes! (some of the rhymes are mind-blowing, as I've never seen those words seamlessly rhymed before, so way to go!). However, it's filled with spelling errors, and Line 7 is saying something similar as Line 4, so it kind of undermines that, and a couple of other lines are undermining each other too by saying similar things, so I would advise taking I look at that. But on the whole, this is well written, and something to be proud of. Well done!