My Eyes

I wrote this b/c im on the phone with this guy named kensari and he is talkin to himself and it made me think about my eyes...

Brown and sexy are what people can see

But they dont know what's inside of me

Like the person I am

And who I want to be

You only see the things I've done in my past

And most of my relationships that don't last

But I am so much more then what you make it out to be

I just wish peoplewould just see me

Like the talent and beautiful soul that I am nurturing back to health

Want to be loved and shared with all the wealth

The wealth of a love so pure and true

And i only wanna be seen by you

So next time you see me you will be hypnotized

When staring into my eyes

Author's Note

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[alan peter kelly]

this is an endearing write...it warmed my heart...articulate / well written and an extension of all you wrote about in the poem...

But I am so much more thAn you make it out to be

its tender and sweet as befitting your age...it fits you well...i look forward to reading more of your art...

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Lovely poem, like how your pushing for others to look forward instead of the past. Your true personality is just waiting to just pop out and show its self to everyone, this poem truly captures that :D

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

THANK YOU SO MUCH

[Aven]

I found it charming. I can see how people have trouble seeing past those big brown eyes. :)

[Poetry Girl]

this is a good poem with good flow and i liked it. its like you're tired of people looking at your past or just looking at how you look on the outside. its like you want people to look deep inside you to the real you that you want people to see.