Letting Go of You

well um just confused.. i got a head ahce.. had to write something...

Kiss me ever so softly on my lips

and put your hands on my hips

Hold me close and hold me tight

I never want to say good night

Push me on the bed and get on top

I never want this feeling to stop

Our bodies become one with each other

I know there will never be another

Who will make me feel so nice inside

Make me not want to question my pride

But you pull away and Im left alone

I open my eyes to see im at home

And it was all dream

A fantisy of mine

Why do I think about you all the time

You hurt me so bad And killed every light inside of me

Now im not what i use to be

So you win and I give up

If you love her I dont give a f**k

I have to let go and love someone new

I have to go because i know we are threw

And i found him and he is something great

There just one thing i really hate

I want him so bad and i want to be true

The only problem is im still in love with you! 

Author's Note

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[Poetry Girl]

this was a good poem, i liked it. its like you want to love someone else because you just dont WANT to still love him but you cant help it, cant help how you feel. i understand. this is good, keep it up :)

[Aven]

The first 8 lines were magical. So full of power, so drunk with love. There are some misspelled words, fantasy, and through, but overall this was a lovely poem. Keep them coming! :)